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The Bag Man

 

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Baden Prince

 

It started as a light pitter-patter on the roof. Then, for three days, it rained.  Caribbean islanders have always welcomed the rain.  When it came the land yielded a rare and precious gift - crabs! Thousands of them, a homeless horde evicted from their underground shelters by the rainwater.

Groups of men gathered in the deep, velvet-black Antiguan night to reap this rich harvest. Some carried "flambeaux," torches made in the traditional way, bundles of green firewood wrapped with kerosene-soaked rags, designed to burn for hours. These  sputtering, smoky firebrands added to the drama of the hunt.

That night my uncle Sydney took me out "torching."  I was in a whirl of excitement, oblivious to the fact that at the age of twelve, I was likely to be more of an irritant and a hindrance than anything else. However, this was not lost on the group's leader, Mister Oliver, who wasted no time making his feelings known.

"What you here to do, boy?" he asked, sternly. "Tell you what, you can be a bag man." With that, he tossed me a rough sack. A few of the other men began to laugh uncomfortably, covering their mouths with their hands. "Somebody catch a crab, you hear them call, you go over with the bag, OK?"

"What they will say?" I asked, all wide-eyed innocence. The sniggering broke out into derisive laughter, quickly stifled by a glare from Mister Oliver.  He turned back to me, he said: "Just lissen, right, and you will hear. Oh, another thing," he continued, "You carry the bag, right? You don't drop it, you don't put it down. Okay?"

"Okay, " I said. My chest swelled happily with the burden of responsibility.

As we set off, our way was lit by three of the men. The catchers were behind them and the bag men brought up the rear. The average "land" crab is about the size of a big man's hand and weighs approximately half a pound. It has two claws.  The larger claw is used to catch and hold its prey, the smaller claw to rip it to pieces and feed itself. When a torchbearer spotted a crab he moved in front of it, blinding it. The catcher then moved into position behind these land-dwelling creatures making sure to avoid the wildly waving pincers, which could deliver a painful, skin-piercing nip. As soon as the catcher had the crab, someone shouted, "Over here" and one of the bag men rushed over, carefully opened the neck of the sack, and  deposited the flailing victim inside.Clambake Crabs by Paul Brent

I was always the first to rush when I heard the call. At first I wondered why the other bag men didn't seem bothered  that my sack was filling up much faster than theirs. But after half an hour, I discovered the reason for their reticence - and my artificially elevated status.

As the sack filled up, it became more difficult to carry. At first, I held it away from my body but as it became heavier - and as the night drew on and I became more tired and sleepy - I needed to use my body as a fulcrum for the weight.

The first time I allowed the bag to rest against my legs, the sustained pincer attack made me scream out in pain. The rest of the group hissed: "Quiet! You will frighten de crab!" Mister Oliver added: "Make sure you don't drop de bag!" Their concerns were simple, clear and did not include sympathy for my suffering.

After my sack was nearly full, I carried its live and angry burden for the remainder of the outing. At some point, tiredness and continuous pain combined to render me completely numb. I hoisted the bag onto my back, the neck slung over my shoulder. The mud threatened to hold my feet captive and I had to fight it with each step. I was completely drenched and my teeth chattered from the cold.

Eventually, around 2:00 or 3:00 a.m., we had caught all the crabs that we could carry and headed back to the truck. I was past caring about any share of the spoils.  Exhausted, I set down my sack and fell fast asleep. I woke up when we stopped in town. Mister Oliver was the first to get off the truck. Just before he climbed down, he reached over and patted me on the head.

"Well done, younger, well done," he said. "You really work hard for yours!"  There was admiration in his voice and, as he spoke, a broad grin covered the stern set of his features. I felt a burst of pride that almost - almost - obliterated the pain, the cold, and my tiredness. A bag man. That was me!

 

Baden Prince. Writer, poet, and performer

Baden is a writer of poetry and autobiographical prose-fiction, exploring the links between personal histories and wider social and political issues. His writing draws on the richness of his Caribbean heritage, as well as his experience of growing up in Britain, where he has lived since the age of fifteen.

Clambake Crabs by Paul Brent available at Art.com

 

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