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The Rose & Thorn

The Night of the Scorpions
2002 Pushcart Prize Nominee 

by
Elisha Porat
porat_el@einhahoresh.org.il

translated from Hebrew by Alan Sacks


Some months ago, a heavy, oppressive Hamsin—a desert wind—swept over the country. The heat suffocated chickens in their coops while trees withered and dropped their ripe fruits in the orchards. I had trouble falling asleep at night with the heat trapped in the house. Mosquitoes swarmed around the bed; strange insects rustled on the floor. It seemed as if even the jays couldn't fall into that peculiar slumber that birds sleep.

I grabbed a damp towel, went out to the porch, and lay down in the rope hammock my neighbor had strung between the cypress trees. The grass glowed and thick warm air wafted from deep within the bowels of the gardens. The sloping roofs dissolved in the wind's clear skies as a faint silvery crescent shined through the shimmering haze and a dull rumbling drifted from the shrouded orange groves. I rocked slowly in the hammock, listening to the woeful lowing of penned cattle far off in the dark. I tried to flee the agonies of insomnia, giving myself entirely to the hammock's sway, yielding myself so completely that I forgot where I was. The Hamsin wrapped me in its fever and I was borne aloft on the wings of misty memories to another parched night that I had endured long ago.
 
A Hamsin night, much like this, between the holidays of Passover and Shavu'ot, when the earth's vermin rose up against a tired company of soldiers on the bright stone slopes of the mountains of Samaria. They rebelled with such fury they very nearly conquered the troops. A nice beginning, I thought, sinking into the rhythms of memory, and continuing to wrestle with the legacy of that night, that Hamsin night of scorpions.  I had never seen such an astounding spectacle in my life. All the desert's scorpions, thousands upon thousands—you couldn't tell in the sweltering dark whether they were yellow, black, or brown—had gathered at our company's gritty camp of soldiers, some of whom had been hurt in an accident and the rest tired and shriveled from thirst the week before. The men ran around panic-stricken in their combat boots and skimpy underwear. Even the bravest of the company's soldiers, the proud volunteers who took pride in shooting the new machine-guns, shouted for help. The tormented drivers jumped into their seats, someone shouted an order and their headlights went on. The vehicles began to plow through the camp, crushing thousands of stinger-drawn scorpions. But beneath the ground pulp sprouted new scorpions erupting from the sand. Column after column formed up in the furrows left by the drivers' wheels. From the eastern sector, from the general direction of the refreshing Jordan-Jericho, rose a strange vapor.Scorpion Image

Was a full moon shining over the company, illuminating each dark segment on the tails of the hordes of scorpions? Could I hear the insects, the cry of these small creatures or had I too lost my mind, just like the raving soldiers of our abandoned company? The dark tent's flickering lights calmed me down. The tranquil lowing of the cattle skipped on the breeze, and the placid bleating of goats betrayed no sign of fright or discontent. The poor deputy CO summoned the platoon commanders and the incompetent orderlies, mess hall tables were turned into improvised cots, mattresses were hung between tent poles like large hammocks. Terrified soldiers climbed into them as if they were sent to their rescue, while on the tables the scorpions scrambled across their rifle butts.

That pleasant, acrid odor given off by the tingling acid of ants spread over the encampment. Layer upon layer of the insects were stomped and trampled, but below them, inside the fissures of the earth, welled up fresh new battalions of swift, fearsome scorpions, their tails unfurled and their stingers raised. Woe to him who made the mistake of striking a match or flicking on his flashlight for a moment, for it drew hordes of scorpions, all streaming towards the light. Woe, and more woe to him who hadn't fled from the campfires, into which the insects crawled endlessly and unwaveringly, to split open in the flames.

It was only the officers' tent, set off by itself, where none of the scorpions entered. I had been left alone in the tent, but was besieged all the same. I couldn't go out into the sea of scorpions rolling and seething below me. Orders were given in savage, throat-wrenching shrieks. The dryness of the air, the burn of the east wind, and the relentless heat radiating from the ground scrambled the company compound, turning it into a thick stew of lights, screams, dust, and the stench of these repulsive vermin. Heaps of their dead were piled up everywhere.

Through the rolled-up tent flap, I saw the warm lights of the shepherds' tents and heard the tranquil sounds of gurgling around the dust-ridden company camp. During the day, when I sweated on the range and followed the shooters and cursed the careless, I didn't notice these sounds. The roar of gunfire and the range marshals' orders blotted them out, but now on my bed, cut off from everything, I imagined that I would even be able to hear the roosters crowing just before sunrise.

I didn't dare get off the mattress for a minute. The canteens I had filled and put beside me grew heavy against my rolled-up shirt. To defend myself against the invaders, I also heaped up crinkling sheets of newspaper around me and wedged thick board under the mattress, a barrier against scorpions that also worked against back pain. I tied my shoes above me in the lashing and ignored the cries of the soldiers, the rumble of angry engines, and the screeches of the abandoned company's radio receiver. I drifted to the cool falls of Jordan-Jericho, to the brooks and the dripping ferns and the secluded river's shaded recesses, all the way to the boundary of our eastern sector, beyond which it is absolutely forbidden to shoot.
 
My rope hammock suddenly creaked beneath me and the trunks of the cypresses trembled. From the closest house came a child's sudden cry. I momentarily awakened from my nightmares and swathed myself in the damp towel, already grown warm on my feverish brow. If I hadn't been sleepy and lazy, I'd have gotten up and soaked it again. Bats woozy from the heat beat on the roof of the porch.  The night of the scorpions appeared before me like a dream that had never happened.

It had been towards morning that the desert's vermin mercifully abated their attack on our wounded company. Their throats parched, the men of our broken troop began to shout the good news from tent to tent. The company CO heard of the surprise assault made by the desert scorpions. He was already on his way back, returning from brigade HQ with a small convoy carrying everything we needed. From below, from the desert road, the radio picked up the doctor's concerned voice as he hurried back with an ambulance driver. They would be at the camp in just a few more minutes.

One platoon leader, a member of the nature society, suddenly got an order and announced in an authoritative voice that he really needed heroes now. He would painstakingly classify each type of scorpion that had attacked us in the night; not one would be overlooked. Whoever had any strength left, any fighting spirit, was invited to sift through the piles of corpses, aided by the field guides he pulled out of his knapsack.

Through the open flap, I heard the roosters crowing in the distance. I saw the lights going out in the shepherds' lodges. And I heard the flocks going out to pasture, to the glowing slopes of the eastern mountains of Samaria. Had there been any injured, wounded, stung? No, I don't remember; I think not a single soldier was stung. Such strange incidents occur in nature. In the crazy desert, you always expect surprises. 

That Hamsin night between the end of Passover and the holiday of Shavu'ot, on the ivory limestone slopes of Samaria's mountains, I saw how the desert's insects had risen against a far-flung company of soldiers, laying siege to the camp, blocking all routes to the water tanks and the ammunition depot. They streamed over the cracked earth and overran the mounds of gear meant for the final live-fire exercise. It was as though they had a well-prepared plan for foiling the drill. Some of them were even caught in the chair intended for the Minister of Defense.

Their stingers held high and reeking of acidic vapors, these daring insects had confounded all insecticides, all swatters and sprayers. Had they not retreated, the moment was not far off when they would have driven the company's stunned men off into the desert; a humiliating flight that would rout soldiers wearing only skimpy underwear and heavy combat boots.

I sat by the edge of the tent, draped in a mosquito net. If it was good against gnats, it should be good against scorpions. Loud, heart-rending ballads came from the shepherds' tents. I was struck by a desert yearning that has no name. Perhaps someone had tried to talk to me that night, and the scorpions had been a part of it. But who was I, a frail man, that I could read the writing of insects?

I rose with the rising sun, putting the rolled netting about me like a transparent dress. 

The jays struggled awake in the dense boughs above my porch. The brief Hamsin night had come to an end. The wet towel that I had wrapped around me had long since dried out and the rope hammock had pressed red creases deep into my flesh. I was all mixed up by what I had seen and remembered. Before I escaped to my bed, I remembered, with difficulty, where to find the switch to the air conditioner.







Elisha Porat is a Hebrew-Israeli poet and writer. Many of his works have been translated into English, and published in many literary venues. He was among the 1996 winners of Israel's Prime Minister's Prize for Literature. His book, a collection of short stories, The Messiah of La Guardia was released in 1997. His e-book Growing Old, new and selected poems, has just been published on the web.


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