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& Thorn The Maiden and the Eagle— A Fable
 
 

by
Lonnie Walton
LonnieW721@aol.com


 

Once upon a time, there lived a young woman. She kept herself hidden in a small cottage upon a hill above a tiny village. Day after day, she stayed within these chambers, unwilling to venture beyond the front door because she was afraid. She was afraid of the open spaces; she was afraid of the woods surrounding the small hill, which was necessary to travel through before she could get to the small town below. She was afraid to make any pilgrimage from the tiny world she had created.

This stunted space was all she knew. Her world was held within the walls of the cottage and the small garden to the back of the house. She swept, she cleaned, she cooked and she tended to her garden every day. Day after day, it was the same.

One day a knock came upon the door! She opened it to find an eagle perched upon the porch railing.

"Good morning, Miss," declared the eagle. "What a fine day it is to soar! Might I tempt you to fly with me?"

The young woman drew a deep breath to quiet her suspicions. "Oh I see you are a magnificent bird," she cried, "and certainly anyone might feel safe with you. You seem capable of great flights. But I cannot go. I cannot leave these confines to face the terrors I would surely encounter with you!"

"Nonsense!" cried the bird. "I see that you are a fair maid. One who makes my heart ache with your beauty of face and spirit. I could love you wholly and entirely, if only you would allow. I know my journeys will be made better with you beside me."

The eagle smiled broadly and she felt her tethered soul lighten. Never before had she seen such charm, such want and need in such deeply searching eyes! She felt her heart swell at the beauty of his words, at the adventure and the freedom he offered to her.

The eagle vaulted from the railing to stand squarely in front of her. With a quick wink, he said "I am enchanted with your beauty and I can tell you are a sensitive soul. Do you not know that eagles such as I are endangered and must be well cared for?"

The young woman was softened and felt her heart open to his sensitive and needy soul. "You should come inside," she said, "and I shall brew us some tea while we discuss this journey of yours."

"No," cried the eagle. "I cannot come into your abode for cages frighten me. Instead, write me your thoughts and leave your notes in the top of that apple tree in your garden. I shall pick them up and leave my replies in the same fashion."

With a nod, the young woman agreed immediately. The eagle hopped down each step of her porch, walking a way down the path towards the woods. He stopped, turned his head to look back at her and with little effort opened his wings and soared into the heavens, leaving her to ponder what she would write to him that evening.

She raced through her evening meal and her tasks to keep the cottage tidy. It was dark when she finally sat at the table in the glow of the hearth-fire and candlelight. She began to write. Paragraphs and pages poured out of her. Poetry she did not know was in her heart flowed out upon the quickly-filled pages of her letter.

She heard the rooster crow before dawn and, sprinting from the table, she raced into the morning twilight to leave her note of love up within the branches of the apple tree. As time progressed, each morning became the same wait for the dawn. Sometimes it would come rosy-colored, sometimes strawberry blonde. Sometimes it rained with great clashes of lightning and thunder. But it was always the same dawn to her and the same eagerness to converse with the eagle.

She never saw his arrivals or departures. Always her notes were gone when she looked within the branches. Most times the eagle left notes of his own. His messages took her breath away with their sensitivity and passions, imploring or gently coaxing her to join him in his flights of fancy. He crafted his words to the shape of her heart and slowly but surely, she became obsessed with the thought of him until she could do nothing but while away the hours thinking of and writing to him.

Finally came an evening when, feeling bold enough, the young woman wrote to ask the eagle to visit with her again on the porch. The eagle responded in his own note saying he would do this for her, but only with certain conditions. "I cannot bear," he said, "to see you and not be able to fly away with you. For now, offer me this much: I will meet you on your porch, but you must remain cloistered within your cottage. It is only your voice I need for now."

The young woman was touched by his honesty and agreed to meet him on his terms. That evening she stood at her window and called gently to him, "Eagle, please come to me now. Eagle, are you near?"

"I am here, fair maiden. I am just below your window on the porch where we met."

"Are you a prince?" she asked him.

"I am what you make me to be, dear one," he replied. "I am your hero and fears, all rolled into one. Are you frightened?"

"Oh, dear Eagle, I am very much so! But I feel alive as I never have before," she breathed. "I have never yearned so much to be free, as you are!"

"Then come with me," he whispered.

"I cannot yet, dear bird. I am still afraid," she responded.

"As you wish," the eagle said. "Just sit here now and abide with me a while. We shall discover your strengths by taking down your walls. Do you prefer they should come down in one big crash or brick by brick?"

"You make my heart pound with your talk of such things," she cried. "I feel myself yearning to fly with you above the clouds, high over the town to whatever lies beyond! I believe I could be safe with a magnificent eagle-prince such as you appear to be."

The eagle only smiled into the dusk.

Many nights followed with such talk between them. At each dusk she would call to the eagle and he would soar in on the purple evening skies and they would share their voiced anticipation of each other. One night when she felt buoyed up in her eagerness to be closer to him, she asked "What would you do if one morning I sat in the top of the apple tree to wait for you?"

"My precious maiden," he declared. "I should pluck you from the branches and carry you off to a great beyond such as you could never imagine. I should be the happiest eagle in the skies if you were to offer yourself to me in that manner. My endangered life would be complete."

And the young woman only smiled into the dusk.


The Day Dream

The Day Dream, 1880, by Dante Gabriel Rossetti

The days began to pass more slowly for the young woman. It seemed hours were added to each span of day in her impatient wait for her commune with the eagle. She heard music in her head. Old songs with new meanings. Her heart was completely given over to this winged suitor and her letters of yearning and love continued to him, day after day. She continued to place her letters in the branches of the apple tree, straining each morning to find some sign of him in the dawn's skies. But it was always the same. Her letters would be gone when she looked again, to be replaced somehow by notes from the eagle, always proclaiming his ardor and devotion to her. She never once glimpsed nor heard his winged commute.

It was after a particularly long night of writing and anticipation that she arose that particular dawn to a feeling of safety and surety of her heart's desire. Dressing carefully and warmly, she tiptoed out to the garden where the apple tree stood, naked in the autumn's chilled wind. She climbed to the very top, as far as she dared into the branches, to wait for the eagle's approach. The skies began to lighten and the stars were extinguished, one by one, by the approaching dawn. She craned her head this way and that, trying to find a speck in the sky that might signal his arrival. Finally she heard the beat of his nearing wings and looked up as he swooped low across the skies. She screamed her delight as she was clutched by his talons and torn from the branches. The winds became warm and surrounded her like a cocoon as the eagle pressed higher into the heavens.

"This!" shouted the eagle. "This is how it can be for you! Look below! See how small your troubles are from here," he urged.

Beneath her she could see the cottage. How insignificant it all appeared! Her cottage and gardens perched upon the tiny hill, like a wide circle upon a map. The village was neatly placed below, split into sections by narrow roads opening to wider ones, leading out to the world beyond. And the woods were not at all endless, as she had perceived them to be from the ground, but resembled narrow ribbons, dividing one town from another.

"Oh my dear eagle-prince! How marvelous all this is! How wonderful it is that you have revealed this to me! I want to fly with you forever!" She wept, overwhelmed at her feelings of love for him.

And so it seemed, as soon as the flight had begun, the eagle swept down fleetingly, to deposit her on her own front porch! She found herself sitting on the porch-step, the eagle standing upright before her.

"My own dear maiden," he began. "The thing I have feared most is come upon me."


"What, my prince, could that be?" she queried.

"That I must leave you here and return no more," he answered, sadly. "I cannot take you further and fear any more flights would only make it that much harder for us to part."

"And why must we part?" she cried, her tears spilling onto her windblown cheeks.

"I must leave that for you to decide, dear lady," he answered before he slowly backed away, unfolded his wings and took to the clouds.

In the days, the weeks, the months that followed the young woman continued her writings to the eagle. Before long the apple tree was covered with envelopes, its branches threatening to break under the burden as she continued to leave her notes and letters there, one by one, dawn by dawn. Before long the letters spilled over to cover the garden, the path, the house and the porch. Still she wrote. Until one day she ran out of both ink and paper and, without remembering her old fears, she hastened down the hill, through the woods and into the village below.

 


 

I am a 50-something woman, now living in the enchanted land of Albuquerque, New Mexico for 4 years, choosing to move here from Southern California when the earth moved under my feet! I chose New Mexico because of the wonderful people and the truly enchanted landscape that stirs the creative juices in the soul of me. To pay the bills, I work as a teacher, instructing students who wish to become Medical Assistants. For my soul, I live on a little piece of river-bottom land where I garden, planting both flowers and vegetables, and raising Pygmy goats, chickens, geese and a rabbit or two.

I cannot remember a time when I didn't write. I have written personal journals throughout my lifetime, especially difficult periods, to get me through. Story writing has been a hobby for me, though I don't necessarily write for publication. The inspiration for "The Maiden and the Eagle" came from a chance online meeting. I allowed my imagination to come to its conclusions, simply asking myself "What if....?"



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