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Spice up Your Murder

 

by
Marcia Kiser

 

 

Every cook knows the basic spice in cooking is salt.  Add a little pepper and the dish takes on a little zing.  Take a favorite casserole and experiment with basil and oregano, or curry and cumin, or sage and mustard and taste how the added spices change the flavor of the casserole. 

The protagonist and the plot are the meat and potatoes of the mystery casserole.  Add a pinch of this and a dash of that and voila, the mystery steps into the gourmet arena.

To determine the this and that to be added, look to secondary considerations, such as your secondary characters, the setting, and weather.

Sidekick characters are a time-honored tradition.  Sherlock Holmes had Dr. Watson, Matt Dillon had Chester (and Festus), and Nick had Nora.  The sidekick character is the most important person in the ensemble cast.  Don't be lulled into thinking of the sidekick as a comedic straight man.  The sidekick is the protagonist's confidante, accomplice, and general pain-in-the-neck.  When the protagonist wants to give up or is stumped, the sidekick is the one who says exactly the right thing to get the protagonist moving and thinking.

The sidekick can be as zany or as somber as desired.  The sidekick is not a copy of the protagonist, but the two should have a common bond, something that drew the two characters together.  Nowhere is it written that the two must be friends, but they must have some relationship.  If your protagonist is a klutzy, big-haired, tie-dyed, never-left-the-sixties person, the sidekick could be a smooth, sophisticated corporate lawyer and the two met in a class on Zen Buddhism and share a love of NASCAR racing.  

Also, nowhere is it written that the sidekick, or ensemble cast members, must be human.  For example, Dana Stabenow's character, Kate Shugak, has Mutt, a wolf-hybrid.  Mutt not only alerts Kate to low-lifes by turning up her nose and helps capture the bad guys, but saves Kate's life when required.  Lilian Jackson Braun's Jim Qwilleran has Koko and Yum-Yum.  Jim talks things over with Koko, who has an uncanny knack for giving Jim hints, if Jim could understand them.  Of course, once the case is solved the evidence that Koko laid out in front of him is easy to read.

Jonathan Kellerman put an interesting twist on the sidekick character by having Detective Milo Sturgis as sidekick to Dr. Alex Delaware, child psychologist, to whom Milo turns to for forensic psychology.  Milo is gay, pale with dark hair, 60s sideburns, no fashion sense, tenacious and obsessive with one of the highest success rates on the force.  Alex is heterosexual, quiet, studious, introverted, enjoys the guitar and classic blues music, and is also obsessive and tenacious, and believes in getting the bad guy.  Both have seen things that would make most of us physically ill and emotionally unbalanced . . . and they survived.  A crusading pair of white knights. 

On the lighter side, Jill Churchill paired her suburban single mom, Jane Jeffry, with Shelley Nowack.  Shelley is Jane's opposite in almost every way, yet the duo is best friends and next-door neighbors.  Jane is fuzzy, comfortable and a little ragged.  Shelley is sleek, ultra-efficient and obsessive-compulsive.  The duo investigates their neighborhood murders together and independently, but Jane puts the clues together.

Some secondary characters can, and will, take on a life of their own and jump to center stage, overshadowing the protagonist, which is fine as long as the plot continues to move along.  You'll be surprised what those characters will add to the mystery.

Another dash of spice to add to your mystery is setting.  Setting encompasses not only place but time, and the whole world is open to your imagination.  One cautionary note though, if you are not personally familiar with your locale -- research, research, research.  Location adheres to the rule of 'write what you know'.

Michael and Kathleen O'Neal Gear, husband and wife writing team, selected the Southwest for their new series beginning with The Visitant.  They know their locale as only archeologists can.  What sets the Gears work apart is the time.  In each book, time alternates between the past and present, with a complete cast of characters for each period.  The ancient ones go about their daily lives, eating, gathering, hunting, living and dying while solving a mystery in their midst.  The contemporary group uncovers the ancient ones’ lives and mystery and tries to answer questions they left behind while contending with their own mystery.

Medieval England, ancient Rome, early 19th century Egypt, or the contemporary world as we know it, all abound with possible locations as well as possible times.  Again, know your area and the time involved.

Details make the story is an apt truism in mystery writing due to the eclectic locations writers choose.  Mysteries occur around the world.  Another spice to flavor your mystery comes out of location -- weather. 

In all locations, weather can become another member of your ensemble cast.  Sue Henry's mysteries are set in Alaska where weather is a daily life-and-death consideration.  One feels the temperature plummet and shivers along with the characters while reading her books.  Sinclair Browning's Trade Ellis mysteries, set in LaCienega, Arizona, are another example of using weather.  Browning captures the desert climate to the point where the reader feels the heat and even longs for a drink of cool water while wishing for a bandanna to wipe away the sweat or wrap around the steering wheel.

Use some old-fashioned weather wisdom to add even more spice to the weather and, in turn, to the mystery.  Old sayings concerning the weather abound in our cultural folklore.  'A ring around the sun or moon and rain approaches on the run' may be great for farmers, but not so great for law enforcement officials securing an outdoor crime scene.  'Cranes aloft, the day is soft; swallows soar, good weather more' is exactly what any sleuth, professional or amateur, wishes for when detecting.  Not only do you spice up your mystery using weather wisdom, but your readers learn something as well.

Make your reader shiver or swelter right along with the protagonists and you will create a memorable tale.

Once a diner has tasted an outstanding dish, they will return again and again, just as the mystery reader will return to an exceptional mystery writer.  Add a pinch of character and a dash of time, place or weather to spice up your mystery and make it memorable. 

 

Marcia Kiser writes, works and lives in Lubbock, TX with her husband, Eckert, and their SharPei mix, Kaiser Sosei. She is a member of Sisters in Crime, the Palo Duro Chapter of NSDAR and was a contributing editor to Murderous Intent Mystery Magazine. Pubications include The Writer's E-Zine, The Writer's Room Magazine, The Murder Hole, The Thrilling Detective, Dusty Cowboy, Novel Advice Mysterical-E, FUTURES, Over My Dead Body, and the recently released Novel Advice Anthology.

 

 

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