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The Chrysalis of Discipline

 

by
Donna Sundblad

"You could write a story about that." Words like these kindle memories of a lifetime of unique experiences, and the myriad of untold stories that beg to be freed from the inner world of wonder known as your imagination. But you retard your growth as a writer when you allow excuses to overtake your dreams. If you neglect to challenge yourself to develop these ideas, it is by choice. To improve your writing the key is discipline…another choice.

Among the caterpillar’s stages of life, the chrysalis is where the most dramatic change takes place. The cocoon develops slowly, beginning at one end of the caterpillar’s body, until the entire body is encased. It is similar for a writer.

I remember setting my first serious writing goal. Sentence by sentence I penned my sci-fi novel. My first completed draft brought a sense of accomplishment five years later, but large spans of inactivity had caused the project to needlessly drag. I had wasted valuable time re-reading my story to refresh my memory regarding pertinent details because I lacked the discipline to make my writing a priority, instead of simply something I did in my spare time.

Like many novices, I also made the mistake of painting myself into a corner by using trademarked characters. This narrowed my submission possibilities to one publisher, and brought a new and bigger challenge. After five years of work, I needed to start over, developing my own characters and worlds while using the same plot.

Why did it take me so long to learn this valuable lesson? Again, I lacked discipline. In this case, it was the discipline to allow my work to rest before editing and rewriting, to enlist the help and support of others as I went along, and to be constantly in search of new ideas and topics.

Had I enveloped myself in the chrysalis of discipline prior to sitting down to write my sci-fi thriller, right now I would have a novel ready to submit rather than a lengthy rewrite project.

Challenge Yourself Not To Waste Time
For many people, January brings the routine of re-evaluating goals for the New Year. I vowed to set aside 30 minutes a day, five days a week, to write. I’m a morning person, so I set aside my 30-minute allotment for the time of day that works for me. One advantage to scheduling my time early in the day was that it was less likely to be overtaken by the busy-ness of the day’s activities.

In addition, this discipline primed the pump of my creativity because the 30-minute time slot made me hunger for more time to write. Today, if an opportunity affords itself, I’m prepared to make use of it. I carry a hard copy of my current projects in my briefcase so that I can work on them whenever I find myself with some time to kill. Instead of returning home with a complaint about how long I waited at the dentist’s office, I arrive home with completed revisions.

By watching for possibilities and not squandering the spare moments that present themselves, I disciplined myself not to waste time and fought the inclination to procrastinate.

Let Your Work Rest
New writers need to curb their excitement about a new draft and allow it to rest before editing and rewriting. On the other hand, it is important not to waste time with long periods of inactivity.

My goals no longer focus on one project, but rather on the craft of writing. This freedom allows me to work on multiple ventures, hone my skills, and put my freshly written articles aside without wasting valuable time. I move back and forth from one undertaking to another, setting each project aside for a day or two. When I pick it up again, I have a fresh perspective, making it easier to see needed improvements. This is when I read it aloud and look for flaws in words and structure. Does it say what I want it to say? Are the words precise?

Now I know the importance of disciplining myself to wait, revise, and rewrite.

Seek Help & Support
There are a variety of places for writers to find support, including formal classes and local writers’ groups. In today’s busy world, the assistance available online is priceless. In such an atmosphere, I would have learned sooner of the pitfall of using trademarked characters in the first draft of my novel.

Now, I am involved in more than one online writer’s group. The key word is "involved," another thing that requires discipline. The guidance offered within these cyber-walls, including peer feedback, is not only helpful but also inspirational. It is here among peers that I realized I customarily wrote in the passive voice, and challenged myself to change. Within these groups there are deadlines, assignments, and accountability. It helps me write even when I don’t feel like it. This nudge prepared me to handle deadlines.

Fresh Ideas & Topics
When you write regularly, your need for a bevy of ideas from which to draw increases. Discipline yourself to take note of what happens around you. Look for fresh topics. Write them down. We are surrounded by stories.

Last night on the way to dinner, someone in the car told me about a woman who parked her car on the lines around a handicap-parking place. She received a ticket and returned to the store she patronized, expecting them to pay her fine because she had been shopping there when ticketed. I took out my notepad and wrote it down.

When you maintain a writer’s mindset, you net topics before they escape. Put a notepad on your nightstand. You may think you won't forget the fantastic idea crossing your mind as you fall asleep, but it evaporates like the dew in the morning light. Capture it on paper.

Before You Submit
Just think how an editor feels when they receive a error filled submission. You see how the previous sentence distracted you? I purposely allowed a typographical, as well as grammatical, error to make my point. Not only are careless mistakes distracting, but they scream out that the writer is unprofessional. In this day of spell checkers, there’s no reason to submit work with misspelled words. However, after using spell check, it is important to read your work. Do you mean disburse or disperse? Spell check will allow both; it is necessary to manually proof your work.

Research your market. Learn the editor’s name and be sure the publisher, agent, or magazine publishes the type of work you are submitting. Obtain a copy of the submission guidelines from your potential prospect. A useful source for such information is Writer’s Market. You can usually find this resource in your local library, but I find it a book worth purchasing. It’s a waste of your postage, time, and paper to make an inappropriate submission. Armed with pertinent information, present your proposal.

As writers, it is often these non-creative aspects of our profession that require the most discipline; however, if you neglect them, you are sealing your fate as an unpublished author.

Transformation Within The Chrysalis
Changes occur gradually as we learn to incorporate various disciplines into our lives as authors. Following these guidelines will allow you to reap the benefits afforded within the chrysalis of discipline. It can transform you from a humdrum writer inching your way among unfinished projects like a caterpillar to a prolific, published author.

 

Donna Sundblad resides in southwest Florida, a vast change from the suburbs of Chicago where she was raised. She raises birds and is affectionately known as "Birdie" among her writing peers. Her published credits include several Writer’s Tips for WVU, and short stories published online at Writer’s Hood, and Night Wind (the Fiction Magazine) where she serves as the Write Right Editor.

 

 

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